Hi buddy. First of all, I would like to congratulate you for the work you have done. you are really successful. I can say it's the best game I've ever seen. Its subject, story, fluency, arouses curiosity in people. and I can't help but say; please send the new update as soon as possible. I check the page every day to see if there is an update. I can't wait for the sequel, especially for Maria. thanks dude.
Great Job Raybae. I am Honestly loving the story, finally it's not just about the sex. Sure the sex is nice but honest seeing the MC is not a Douche and is actually trying to help the maid and the other characters are so diverse. I really don't mind supporting you developers on Patreon, keep up the good work. An honestly killer way to end that update now I am seriously waiting for the next update to see "Paige" :P lol
Honey Select is not built for making babies. That's why you rarely see babies/children in honey select games. The best you can do is make a really short character and then scale it down even more. I did my best :(
Finally a Honey Select RenPy VN with nominally diverse characters, in age background, ethnicity and skin color. The centering of the women's pleasure and why they'd be interested in an attractive business man is appreciated and Sam being a cool queer tattooed coder chick who's explicitly not into the MC is great. A game that deals with immigration, trafficking, the potential issues with pregnancy in a way that feels humanizing is more than great. Can't wait for a 1.0 release, though I don't know how far we are into the story so might have to wait.
I'm shocked that this seems to be Raybae's first game, if I'm not mistaken, because of the storytelling and design talent on screen.
Thank you for the amazing feedback. And yes, this is my first game. I had no prior experience in anything like this, and pretty much started from scratch.
I am on Android (Samsung s20 FE), and I had trouble downloading it, and when I succeed it tells me that the app is not installed. can you put it on mega or do like the other update, ie in .zip please
well, color me surprised, i didnt think a game of this type could so good but here i am absolutely loving it. character designs (altho to be totally honest laura is the only one who looks a little...off), story, the whole shebang, i love it. as a work in progress im really impressed, and cant wait to see what the future holds. the girls have real personalities as well as thiccness, so im sold on that and the story weaves thru every very nicely. having just finished the current version, the only thing i gotta say is u picked a hell of a spot to stop, now imma have story based blue balls XD a job very well done dev, cant wait to see what u got for us next
Fantastic game. I usually edit the living daylights out of Ren'py games, but I had little reason to here; just the odd grammar/spelling thing that irked me. Very well done!
I love this game ! I thought anyone who has heart wouldn't select a bad choice since we could see all their thoughts my eyes filled up with tears in maria path 😭 thank you for all your hard work !!
Quick question. I've played this before on android phone. Deleted it when I was done cuz I needed space on the phone. Came back later to see what shenanigans i can get up to but all the android files "download" but then say the file cant open. Is anyone else having a problem?
Hmm, I played the same game and although there may have been some minor errors with wording, it all still flowed. But then again I am not a grader on English 101. As for the comment on being too short, that is insane! How long does someone want for a free adult VN? Which leads to the next cray comment regarding H scenes not being many or long enough. All I can say is maybe the developer modified in the last seven to nine days, oops, nope, same game for the last ten days lol. Nice flowing story Raybae. Not sure if this is your first release but your on the right track. Good luck.
I do not know how to say this without it sounding rude, but it's not my intention honestly! This game really needs a proofreader. I'm not sure if you are actually aware of this. Check your script out, and you will notice very often there are missing words in sentences, and also wrong words to describe stuff.
It can be very difficult at times to even read some of the things the characters are saying due to a combination of things, which could be very quickly fixed just by adding the missing words and correcting sentences using the right syntax. I really like this game very much, and I am willing to proofread for you, for free.
If there is someone already proofreading for you, then they are doing a terrible job, sorry.
Hi, I just tried to contact you via pm on your discord channel, but i cant send it because it says you need to be friends for me to message you. I am using the same name there as I am here.
ive tried contacting you, but its been impossible even over on your discord channel. i have corrected a couple of the chapters, but i have decided to stall on the remaining few chapters, until i can contact you privately and send these chapters back to you. after which i will quickly work and complete the remaining chapters. I will also need to work on the update before you release, to make it consistent throughout..as mentioned previously.
Question for the developer: (spoiler alert) If you don't decide to kiss Carol on day 17 will there be another chance to "romance" (I guess would be the right word) her without any consequences?
I like this game, plain and simple. Still a bit rough around the edges, but that's to be expected from games in development. The story is engaging, the characters are varied and relatable, the sex scenes are on point, and the pacing is prime.
I love Maria's content, but the Yumi stuff is kinda off putting. The BM theme is something I really don't enjoy and I'll be staying away from any kind of domination route completely. The secretary is cutely done too.
You just gotta work on the spelling/grammar/wrong character speaking issues and it'll be great
noticed quite a few spelling mistakes, and as someone else noted below in their posts, there is definitely some work to do with, which what each character is saying, for example, he and she often tend to get mixed up in coversations, and sometimes, a conversation line is given to the wrong person. for an example, maria might say something, that the MC should say, and there are other little examples littered throughout.
Really loving the plot lines, especially with maria, her sister and of course laura and jameela..wonder if jameela gets brave enough. I am also wondering if and when the FFFM scenese occur at a later point, that they should actually be quite long scenes. Dont get me wrong, really loving your work, but the scenes really need to be extended with more kinky options with the girls. in fact apart from the lactation, i haven't really seen anything in this avn yet that i would consider a kink..would love to have ALL the women in a big orgy with only the main character, with long long scenes, that would be hot as hell...but like i said this is easily one of the better avn's ive seen so far. keep up the great work and please consider what iv'e said above, especially a massive orgy with just the main character! thanks
loved this game, I cant wait for more updates. I hope I can convince Alex to get freaky some day lol. I really liked the Maria plot aswell. The story is seriously amazing so far. good job!
I did like this game and will drop a follow. However I do have to say that it could use some work, for some reason I got stuck a few time early on because the dialogues started going backwards.
Then ofc there's the classic ones where it's obvious that a line is meant for someone else than the one who's saying it, or where it should say she it says he instead.
Stuff like that is ofc nothing serious. But the weird thing where conversations are going backwards are a bit annoying since it's making it a bit tough to go on. But as said, I'm dropping a follow for this game and I'm looking forward to the upcoming updates.
Thanks for playing. Can you be a bit more specific about where you faced these issues? Specially the one about dialogue going backwards? That would be a great help.
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Great Job Raybae. I am Honestly loving the story, finally it's not just about the sex. Sure the sex is nice but honest seeing the MC is not a Douche and is actually trying to help the maid and the other characters are so diverse. I really don't mind supporting you developers on Patreon, keep up the good work. An honestly killer way to end that update now I am seriously waiting for the next update to see "Paige" :P lol
Ok I love the game so far, but that is really not what a baby looks like and it's highly unsettling.
Honey Select is not built for making babies. That's why you rarely see babies/children in honey select games. The best you can do is make a really short character and then scale it down even more. I did my best :(
It looks then even more strange, when the baby has bumps on her chest :) I have seen some similar cases.
How do you unlock the 2nd scene in the 4th page of the gallery(the one between Maria shower scene and the taxi scene)?
I want to know that too I tried some alternative routes but can't unlock those two
Please tell me we are not going to have to wait four month for the next update
Finally a Honey Select RenPy VN with nominally diverse characters, in age background, ethnicity and skin color. The centering of the women's pleasure and why they'd be interested in an attractive business man is appreciated and Sam being a cool queer tattooed coder chick who's explicitly not into the MC is great. A game that deals with immigration, trafficking, the potential issues with pregnancy in a way that feels humanizing is more than great. Can't wait for a 1.0 release, though I don't know how far we are into the story so might have to wait.
I'm shocked that this seems to be Raybae's first game, if I'm not mistaken, because of the storytelling and design talent on screen.
Thank you for the amazing feedback. And yes, this is my first game. I had no prior experience in anything like this, and pretty much started from scratch.
very good game and u are hella talented
This game has great animations, and one of the best stories I've come across for a VN. So good I now support OP on Patreon.
Now I'm curious if Bianca's child is mine...
I am on Android (Samsung s20 FE), and I had trouble downloading it, and when I succeed it tells me that the app is not installed. can you put it on mega or do like the other update, ie in .zip please
here is mega link for android https://mega.nz/#!Y4FyiZSA!LOYM2_6yKkZeOPV9UZZsBLnc2_-0NBnwz9aeyHTnP5I
I hope that works for you.
well, color me surprised, i didnt think a game of this type could so good but here i am absolutely loving it. character designs (altho to be totally honest laura is the only one who looks a little...off), story, the whole shebang, i love it. as a work in progress im really impressed, and cant wait to see what the future holds. the girls have real personalities as well as thiccness, so im sold on that and the story weaves thru every very nicely. having just finished the current version, the only thing i gotta say is u picked a hell of a spot to stop, now imma have story based blue balls XD a job very well done dev, cant wait to see what u got for us next
Really great game, I absolutely love it and look forward to seeing how this game progress more.
Just one question. Is there any sound in this game other than the music? Like sex sounds, that should be in a game like this and not just silence.
Not at the moment. But that is something I hope to add in the future.
Why is there 3 different android apks? How do I know which one I need to download?
the 'arm64' version should work for most modern smartphones
how long this game came with the new update
Fantastic game. I usually edit the living daylights out of Ren'py games, but I had little reason to here; just the odd grammar/spelling thing that irked me. Very well done!
I love this game ! I thought anyone who has heart wouldn't select a bad choice since we could see all their thoughts my eyes filled up with tears in maria path 😭 thank you for all your hard work !!
Having issues with android phone
Quick question. I've played this before on android phone. Deleted it when I was done cuz I needed space on the phone. Came back later to see what shenanigans i can get up to but all the android files "download" but then say the file cant open. Is anyone else having a problem?
Me also
Hmm, I played the same game and although there may have been some minor errors with wording, it all still flowed. But then again I am not a grader on English 101. As for the comment on being too short, that is insane! How long does someone want for a free adult VN? Which leads to the next cray comment regarding H scenes not being many or long enough. All I can say is maybe the developer modified in the last seven to nine days, oops, nope, same game for the last ten days lol. Nice flowing story Raybae. Not sure if this is your first release but your on the right track. Good luck.
i played this game
not sure if there are some alternative endings or choices affect anything besides "how much of the game you will see"
game is pretty okey, its free, support for android, some choices, kind normal and likeable characters (at least for this genre)
game feels kind of short
sex scenes are rather basic, offer some position/view changes
i like renpy sandbox games more, but at least you don't have to wonder whre you must tap to progress or what are you missing
i would say give it a shot, i can see solid work there and hope for more
it's still in early development.
Can you tell me which one is for newer android devices?
I do not know how to say this without it sounding rude, but it's not my intention honestly! This game really needs a proofreader. I'm not sure if you are actually aware of this. Check your script out, and you will notice very often there are missing words in sentences, and also wrong words to describe stuff.
It can be very difficult at times to even read some of the things the characters are saying due to a combination of things, which could be very quickly fixed just by adding the missing words and correcting sentences using the right syntax. I really like this game very much, and I am willing to proofread for you, for free.
If there is someone already proofreading for you, then they are doing a terrible job, sorry.
Hello sycopter, I would be very happy to get some help with proofreading the game. Can you join the discord server, and send me message there?
https://discord.gg/wuHPWmfjWf
Hi, I just tried to contact you via pm on your discord channel, but i cant send it because it says you need to be friends for me to message you. I am using the same name there as I am here.
ive tried contacting you, but its been impossible even over on your discord channel. i have corrected a couple of the chapters, but i have decided to stall on the remaining few chapters, until i can contact you privately and send these chapters back to you. after which i will quickly work and complete the remaining chapters. I will also need to work on the update before you release, to make it consistent throughout..as mentioned previously.
I have replied to you on discord days ago. Check your dm
i havent recieved any dm from you?
v0.5 downloads are now added! Enjoy everyone!
when is the next update`?
Peeking at the patreon headlines makes it look like by end of month.
thanks, let's hope so, really enjoyed the game so far!
From a public post in the patreon
"Maids and Maidens v0.5 will be released in following dates:
Tier 3 — August 29
Tier 2 — September 2 (Along with the official guide)
Tier 1 — September 5
Public — September 6
Thank you to everyone for your patience, and continuous support."
thanks!
do you know whene the update is coming? :)
Question for the developer: (spoiler alert) If you don't decide to kiss Carol on day 17 will there be another chance to "romance" (I guess would be the right word) her without any consequences?
Yes, there will be another route with Carol
I see, thank you for responding, knowing this makes me even more excited for updates!
As others have said, good start to the story, but needs work on the language, a proofreader or something.
No discord?
I am keeping the discord Patrons only for now. But I have plans to open it in future
I like this game, plain and simple. Still a bit rough around the edges, but that's to be expected from games in development. The story is engaging, the characters are varied and relatable, the sex scenes are on point, and the pacing is prime.
I love Maria's content, but the Yumi stuff is kinda off putting. The BM theme is something I really don't enjoy and I'll be staying away from any kind of domination route completely. The secretary is cutely done too.
You just gotta work on the spelling/grammar/wrong character speaking issues and it'll be great
noticed quite a few spelling mistakes, and as someone else noted below in their posts, there is definitely some work to do with, which what each character is saying, for example, he and she often tend to get mixed up in coversations, and sometimes, a conversation line is given to the wrong person. for an example, maria might say something, that the MC should say, and there are other little examples littered throughout.
Really loving the plot lines, especially with maria, her sister and of course laura and jameela..wonder if jameela gets brave enough. I am also wondering if and when the FFFM scenese occur at a later point, that they should actually be quite long scenes. Dont get me wrong, really loving your work, but the scenes really need to be extended with more kinky options with the girls. in fact apart from the lactation, i haven't really seen anything in this avn yet that i would consider a kink..would love to have ALL the women in a big orgy with only the main character, with long long scenes, that would be hot as hell...but like i said this is easily one of the better avn's ive seen so far. keep up the great work and please consider what iv'e said above, especially a massive orgy with just the main character! thanks
Great game and loving it, keep up the great work and can't wait for more updates.
loved this game, I cant wait for more updates. I hope I can convince Alex to get freaky some day lol. I really liked the Maria plot aswell. The story is seriously amazing so far. good job!
I did like this game and will drop a follow. However I do have to say that it could use some work, for some reason I got stuck a few time early on because the dialogues started going backwards.
Then ofc there's the classic ones where it's obvious that a line is meant for someone else than the one who's saying it, or where it should say she it says he instead.
Stuff like that is ofc nothing serious. But the weird thing where conversations are going backwards are a bit annoying since it's making it a bit tough to go on. But as said, I'm dropping a follow for this game and I'm looking forward to the upcoming updates.
Thanks for playing. Can you be a bit more specific about where you faced these issues? Specially the one about dialogue going backwards? That would be a great help.
I think it happened me three times, unfortunate I only remember one. The first time I met Ally at the bar
Thanks. I will try to find what the issue is, and hopefully fix it before the next update.
liked it a lot cant wait for more updates
Nice game so far, it looks clean. Kira is a little scary.
nice game guys...abby is awesome <3
All paths seem well thought out so far. Good writing.
Thanks!