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This sure is a weird country, where underage students would get blamed if it came out they had a relationship with their adult teacher, losses made by a company have to be paid back to them by the person who made the mistake and where debt collectors go after kids for debt after their parents, who made the debt, passed away.  I mean yea its also a country with countless hot horny women who are perfectly fine with being in a harem, so its not all bad. But damn, that is a weird fuckin country lol

Why do half the characters sound like Al Pacino in Scene of a woman. 

Tits! UH AH!

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I have a question about the Domination route. The game warns that there will be heavy consiquences for taking that route. I tried a tiny bit of it and it came across as suuuuuuper rapey so i went back and chose the other option. Is that intentional? Is that what happens if i follow that route?

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It's an all-around great game! The only small issue for me(or if anyone else agrees with me) are the facial constructions. Especially for the main girls like yumi, the placement of her eyes are far too apart and far too low and so is her nose. And some girls have eyes too close to each other. In the scene where you have coffee with sam and had a bet, the placement of the waitress' eyes are more symmetrical than her's. For me who spend a long time adjusting custom characters in games with character creation, i tend to not over adjust, especially if i want to portray a character of different race(other that asian) in Illusion games like Honey Select, AI * Shoujo, and Koikatsu. Or maybe it's just me being nitpicky 😅

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whens the next update going to go live

привет ты смог сделать?

So any true subs?

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i think you nailed what you were going for, girls with stories and character. Story is interesting and still has a lot of potential.

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just finished the game and I feel sad for that cliffhanger 

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any femdom in this game and character name, please?

or dominating personality female character name 

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You can name the character, but as to femdom it's clear the author is going for maledom or vanilla. Which, I personally prefer, but to each their own.

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I personally also prefer that too my guy

This is absolutely outstanding so far! I was apprehensive about downloading, because at first I didn't care for how the character models looked, but eventually I got used to them, and I'm glad I did, because this story is shaping up to be great! I can't wait for the next release, and I'm definitely hoping that there's maybe a scene involving Olivia and Sam in the future, if you know what I mean ;3c

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Any updates for the next version?

我以為萬聖節折扣有最新的渲染,結果沒有,難過

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My shortform review (v0.8.0)

Visuals

The game's renders are middling-quality. However the time saved here has clearly been used to extend the game's length (for the unaware, rendering takes a very long time).

The game uses a style of model which sits between anime and photorealistic. This is an appropriate choice given the rendering quality, but the models aren't as visually engaging as premium AVNs. The women mostly have large breasts, which is fine by me, but small-titty lovers will feel left out.

Writing

The plot starts slowly, but progressively gets more interesting. However, it is never the game's strongest point, as the game feels much more focused on telling each of the girls' stories. Thankfully, the characters are not cardboard cut-outs. As the game progresses, it carefully balances screen-time between all the important characters, which it uses to flesh them out with backstory, personality and development. However, the game falls into the trap of including too many women, reducing the amount of time which can be given to each one. This doesn't feel as egregious as something like My New Family, because the mc is not (yet) in anything approaching a serious relationship with anyone, so there isn't a feeling of disconnect between who the mc should be paying attention to versus where he is spending his time. But there are some women (notably Paige) who feel they should have been given more attention, due to their importance in the plot and the mc's backstory.

The mc is written without a strong personality. This avoids a common problem in AVNs, where strong mc personalities often lead to irritation or uncomfortable player-avatar disconnect. However, the mc's dialogue does sometimes come across as bland. The mc is intended to be morally upright in the plot, and thankfully this does come across in the writing. 

The line-to-line writing is strong. Dialogue feels natural and conversations aren't too short or too long. However, the style of speech does sometimes feel too similar between characters, though this is a common problem even among tier 1 AVNs.

Decisions

The game operates using a choice/points based system. Currently, there don't seem to be any major key choices impacting the story, and the points don't often make much of a difference to which scenes you see. In dialogue selection, there is normally either a "correct" choice which gives you the most points, or none of the choices give you any points and only change the dialogue slightly, or all of the options can be selected one after another before continuing. There are only a handful of places where there are several choices, none of which are truly "correct", which have an impact beyond a small dialogue change. This is certainly better than some games where the developer wastes too much time writing a bunch of branches and so confusing the story and delaying the game (I'm looking at you Where the Heart Is). We can expect to see some previous choices have more of an impact in future updates.

Sex

Sex scenes are frequent, and all (or at least almost all) are extended with multiple animations. The animations aren't very sophisticated, and they are so far all very vanilla (save some optional, fun lactation play). As always, your mileage will vary with how hot you find them.

Audio

Audio consists of some nice background music and the occasional sound effect. More could be done with audio during sex scenes, and there are occasional periods without background music which could benefit from something like ambient background sound.

Verdict

A strong entry into the AVN genre, with a surprisingly long playtime and good writing. While the visuals aren't tier 1 quality and the sex scenes somewhat basic, you can expect a decently engaging story with increasingly 3D characters.

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They wrote a whole god damn essay

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Was thinking the same thing

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Gotta kind of respect it tho

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Exactly. I still wont read it, tho.

I'm really enjoying this so far. I've just got up to a point with a character where I have to choose between 'It doesn't have to be him' and 'He doesn't determine your self-worth'. The walkthrough mod is telling me that the choice can lead to a path where the character cheats with me. I'm happy to take this sort of path, but I was wondering whether if I don't take this path, I can still get together with the character; perhaps she leaves her partner first? Advice would be much appreciated<3

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there will be another path with her in future

Thank you! Corruption it is then!

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the cliffhanger! when is the next update? :D i'm eager to know what will happen to MC and one of the girl's sister. 

so hyped for next update, we gunna be able to bang carol anytime soon?

is there a walkthrough for the scenes?

You can download the official guide in the downloads listed above. However, because there are so many decisions in the game, the guide is pretty long. Therefore,  if you want to use a walkthrough, I would recommend using the walkthrough mod on the f95 page, which lists the points for most decisions. Then you can supplement that with the official guide for when the mod isn't enough.

Finally!!!

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this is one of those games that one might not think much of, until at least they get a chance to play them. So far, i couldn't ask for a better story, and the girls are all adorable. as a brownie (lol) jameela is a personal favorite, but thats due more to her sheer cuteness than anything else in my eyes. I just ended up finishing he game from start to finish in one sitting, and man im so glad i did. gotta say tho Mr/Ms Dev, you chose a hell of a spot to end it on, so i really want to see what happens next. I do hope the next update comes in a timely manner, I havent looked forward to an update since Caribdis's  latest work. and coming from me, thats high praise. I cannot wait to see what you have in store for the next bit of the story. 

Onto the game itself/ First off if youre just looking for something to fap to, move it right along this aint for you. the story is involved with plenty of tension, plenty of cute and somewhat realistic moments, and a good story to serve as a backbone to the whole thing. I dont generally look for a good plot in games of this nature but its always a very pleasant surprise to find one. and the dev has done an outstanding job of conveying this story to us consumers. If youre someone that loves a good story alongside some fun sexy bits this is one for you. plenty of decisions to make and plenty of beautiful women to woo, alongside a healthy dose of drama that could be something much bigger in future; this here is a winning combination. Without spoiling anything, all i can say is that this game is ABSOLUTELY worth a download and playthru, few games of this caliber exist in this genre. Character designs are on point, story is nicely gripping, and each girl has a personality that really shines thru. I honestly wish i hadnt found this game until it was in its complete state as it leaves me wanting more and more each time. All i can hope for is that updates come out at a similar quality at a faster pace, but thats just me being selfish. its worth the wait between updates but if you have the patience, i feel like it would be good to keep tabs on this game till completion and get the whole thing in one shot. IF you dont mind waiting between updates dear user, i HIGHLY recommend downloading and playing thru this game at your earliest convenience. You wont be disappointed. 

And finally to you Raybae, Id like to thank you for such an incredible contribution to the genre and i cannot want to see what you have in store for the future. I WIsh you all the absolute best in both your own personal life and your life as a developer. Frankly, if i was in a position to fund the project and fulfill your wildest development dreams, i would without hesitation. i expect great things from you Raybae, and i cannot wait to see what you have in store for the future. May the winds of fortune favor you in your every endeavor, and I hope that the next update really brings things to the fore. Best of luck, and perhaps on the next update ill have more to rave about. To whose thinking of getting the game, i cannot stress this enough: GET THE GAME YOU WONT REGRET IT

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Finally an update !

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hmm the release schedule said sept 23 for public release and it's already sept 30 and still no public release? because i want to know how will Maria and Gloria  will open up more for the MC XD

i'm anxiously waiting for the public release because i like the storyline and the relationship development i've made with Maria :D

作者釋出最新版本囉,在他的patreon主頁,網址在下方:

https://www.patreon.com/raybaegames

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I only see v0.6 on Patreon.

The public release was meant to be yesterday but not up yet.

Sure it'll be soon though.

公開版本已經釋出到0.7版了,0.8版本,不過優先給訂閱會員體驗,公開得再等幾天。作者之前生病,所有排程都向後延了。

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please get back ! I want to date with nora and jameela ! 

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like the look of the game but i have to ask is there going to be any growing or transformation of any kind?

Is there any sound in the game or will there ever be sound?

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Yes really loved the story and hope raybae games continues to finish it 

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if i may ask, when is the next update. i'll say this in honesty, i AM curious how the story goes and also i like the relationship development between the ladies and the MC. the reason i asked is because i just reached the end of the game. i want to know what will happen to me and the issues with Gloria and with Paige, Yumi and "The Family" thing.
i can't wait for the next update :D
GREAT WORK!!! i love your game

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A few things that I feel I should mention before this thread goes out of hand:

1. This game is not set in America. This game is set in a fictional english-speaking western country that takes inspirations from both US and UK. The game has zero mentions of any American political entity or politicians.

2. Not everything is about America. Immigration is not an exclusively American issue, it's not even an exclusively western issue. Even countries like Bangladesh has immigration issues (search “Rohingya crisis” if you don't know). Just because immigration issues pop up in one of the many storylines in this game, doesn't mean it's about American politics. Again, not everything is about America.

3. This game goes into some serious issues (immigration, human trafficking to name a few). If you don't like serious topics in your porn game, look elsewhere. This game is probably not for you.


Any further comments discussing American politics will be removed.

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based

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Thank you. i was thinking that it could be a Alt America( different Dimension). Thank you for Clearing that up!!

( i think that Maids sister looks More Cute than she does ) Would be great if the MC gets a Few Mill or a B and is able to Build a Bigger House, While thwarting the Mob/syndicate People, then is able to get the Maid, her sister, the Bosses Niece, her girlfriend, His next door Neighbor, her Daughters, Sam ( yes i know shes Fey( lesbian ) her GF, the Girl at the Market, the Girl that Put the Mal wear on his PC, His Pregnant Secretary ( Carol ) the Girl that looks after Mils when Both sisters are away, the Girl that Has a Bad boy Brother and maybe a few More. But Maybe that is just a Fantasy Harem Dream of Mine.

thank you for clearing this up.

The guide does not work on Android or what

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Art style caught attention. Bodies look nice.

What is lacking: absense of facial expressions adequate to the situation/context really kills immersion attempts. Those models look like ragdolls, not alive characters.

Sex scenes feel like a chore for some reason. Generic/lazy like if you're fulfilling checkmarks on a to-do list. I think viewing angles are bad but not only that.

Bad attention to details. You think a bathroom would look like it looks in your game if it REALLY was a bathroom for exclusive venue for super-rich people? Check bathroom in Deviant Anomalies man

Same with cafeteria interior & CEO eating burger & fries (really?) every day for lunch. It kills immersion as it's not consistent with your narrative of him being rich & all

Music... I've heard this guitar track in WAY TOO MANY games already. Stop using it entirely. Makes your product instantly feel mediocre.


Edit: Domination route chosen on Yumi. Music or sfx do not change at all... facepalm. Lines of text & music/atmosphere go opposite directions. Immersion at 0. Ruined. Srsly man go play Deviant Anomalies & learn something from that game. See how they handle important stuff like this. When main character decides to go dark, so has to everything in the game around that moment. You can't just keep music on casual elevator mode :D

So it sets one two together or do they need to be downloading individually?

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I like the ero games with mysteries or good comedy.

This was another good one.

Way more than just teasing and using women. You actually feel like you're solving a corporate espionage crime and also dating on the side.

That said, I think it's time I got back out there and tried dating again too.

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When will the game stop getting into politics? If you didn't do that, the game would be much better. The second anyone starts getting into politics I delete games.  I didn't come for politics, I came for sex and fun.  Keep politics out of games!!!!!

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where did it get into politics?

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There's a lot of jabs in the game about Trump. It's pretty much clearly in the game in references to his "anti ILLEGAL" immigration policies and Biden's "pro ILLEGAL" immigration.  How do you not see that?

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the girls mexican, its a basic stereotype, i dont see any politics in general deportation.

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Did you go through the entire thing? It is all about Trump and Creepy Biden.  Also we have laws on immigration. Being here without the proper channels is ILLEGAL immigration.  We're the only country, it appears, to be unwilling to enforce it. Probably because Democrats need the new voters.  And they do vote, illegally.

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i dont exactly remember the details, i palyed it like 4-5 months ago, if they did use names then yeah its pretty tasteless, if its just deportation as a concept then id have no issue.

Wait... the game is complete?

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Absolutely no mention of a politician's name.  At all.  only one making this about politics is you.   The debates and arguments about immigration policies have been going on in this country LONG before the trumpanzee and his band of clowns blundered their way onto the political stage.


Stop acting like a typical fuckin crayon eater hopped up on jet fuel and cocaine seeing the world through a perspective as narrow as the barrel of an M16.


Also, might I remind you this country was BUILT on the backs of immigrants (many of them forced) by  and for immigrants. (On stolen land)


Sit the fuck down, and shut the fuck up, you give us vets a bad name.  (Assuming you're actually a vet, and not after stolen valor)

Sincerely 

A Disabled Native American Vet.

SSGT of USMC served during Op. Iraqi Freedom

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is there problem are you being racial here. Should go on somewhere.

who is?

Really? 

from the creator of the game,

A few things that I feel I should mention before this thread goes out of hand:
1. This game is not set in America. This game is set in a fictional english-speaking western country that takes inspirations from both US and UK. The game has zero mentions of any American political entity or politicians.
2. Not everything is about America. Immigration is not an exclusively American issue, it's not even an exclusively western issue. Even countries like Bangladesh has immigration issues (search “Rohingya crisis” if you don't know). Just because immigration issues pop up in one of the many storylines in this game, doesn't mean it's about American politics. Again, not everything is about America.
3. This game goes into some serious issues (immigration, human trafficking to name a few). If you don't like serious topics in your porn game, look elsewhere. This game is probably not for you.
Any further comments discussing American politics will be removed.

Fair enough but the characters sure remind me of Trump, so I don't think that's by accident.  I already deleted the games. Porn games and politics, hell, politics in general tends to ruin everything.

When will the next update come?

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Really Great game ☺️

So I am curious what in bonus renders?

Bonus Renders are Special Pictures, Normally it is to the Specks of the Requester. But Can be one that the Game Creator does to Help the Patrons with/for the game

sences or pictures jc 

Some Do Both. This Creator I have No Idea. Best to ask!!

noted

wooooooooooooooooo :3

I am about to download this game and saw pregnancy was a future content if so then will donate a good amount after I give a review if good.  Looking forward to it.

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Lots of content, amazing animations, amazing story.
I appreciate being able to check the current level of each relationship at all times- if I choose to- so I can scroll back and make different, informed choices.

When do I get to do the news reporter

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Best story so far, I love how each character has their own issues and you as the MC has the ability to help them all out. It also helps that most of the characters are very enjoyable.

Tbh I quite enjoyed the lactation part and wish to see more or to see that idea "expand" in the future

But otherwise amazing work, I'd like to tell you to keep it up but I have no authority over you, so I'll settle for a thanks.

Thanks for creating such an addicting game, I'll be watching your career with great interest!

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