Ok question on day 4 ( Sunday )when at the Market talking with Yumi in the background a Girl raises her top. Who is the Girl, Bra or Flesh, and who takes her away?
Loving it so far but the dialogue definitely needs to be proofread. At one point Maria referred to the MC when talking to her sister by saying "Mr Surname." And there are cases where the name doesn't match the person saying it.
I also am confused by how you choose who shows up in the relationship tab. Someone that you sleep with once and never again (from what I can tell) and someone who you don't need to impress at all, shows up. Meanwhile the daughters across the hall who are in several scenes and whom one hates you and one doesn't, aren't on the screen at all.
Some of Zenya dialog of version 0.9 with the mc needs some fixings, sometimes she talks but mc name is on display and sometimes she\ or mc talks there is no name on it. thanks for the update great game.
This sure is a weird country, where underage students would get blamed if it came out they had a relationship with their adult teacher, losses made by a company have to be paid back to them by the person who made the mistake and where debt collectors go after kids for debt after their parents, who made the debt, passed away. I mean yea its also a country with countless hot horny women who are perfectly fine with being in a harem, so its not all bad. But damn, that is a weird fuckin country lol
I have a question about the Domination route. The game warns that there will be heavy consiquences for taking that route. I tried a tiny bit of it and it came across as suuuuuuper rapey so i went back and chose the other option. Is that intentional? Is that what happens if i follow that route?
It's an all-around great game! The only small issue for me(or if anyone else agrees with me) are the facial constructions. Especially for the main girls like yumi, the placement of her eyes are far too apart and far too low and so is her nose. And some girls have eyes too close to each other. In the scene where you have coffee with sam and had a bet, the placement of the waitress' eyes are more symmetrical than her's. For me who spend a long time adjusting custom characters in games with character creation, i tend to not over adjust, especially if i want to portray a character of different race(other that asian) in Illusion games like Honey Select, AI * Shoujo, and Koikatsu. Or maybe it's just me being nitpicky 😅
This is absolutely outstanding so far! I was apprehensive about downloading, because at first I didn't care for how the character models looked, but eventually I got used to them, and I'm glad I did, because this story is shaping up to be great! I can't wait for the next release, and I'm definitely hoping that there's maybe a scene involving Olivia and Sam in the future, if you know what I mean ;3c
The game's renders are middling-quality. However the time saved here has clearly been used to extend the game's length (for the unaware, rendering takes a very long time).
The game uses a style of model which sits between anime and photorealistic. This is an appropriate choice given the rendering quality, but the models aren't as visually engaging as premium AVNs. The women mostly have large breasts, which is fine by me, but small-titty lovers will feel left out.
Writing
The plot starts slowly, but progressively gets more interesting. However, it is never the game's strongest point, as the game feels much more focused on telling each of the girls' stories. Thankfully, the characters are not cardboard cut-outs. As the game progresses, it carefully balances screen-time between all the important characters, which it uses to flesh them out with backstory, personality and development. However, the game falls into the trap of including too many women, reducing the amount of time which can be given to each one. This doesn't feel as egregious as something like My New Family, because the mc is not (yet) in anything approaching a serious relationship with anyone, so there isn't a feeling of disconnect between who the mc should be paying attention to versus where he is spending his time. But there are some women (notably Paige) who feel they should have been given more attention, due to their importance in the plot and the mc's backstory.
The mc is written without a strong personality. This avoids a common problem in AVNs, where strong mc personalities often lead to irritation or uncomfortable player-avatar disconnect. However, the mc's dialogue does sometimes come across as bland. The mc is intended to be morally upright in the plot, and thankfully this does come across in the writing.
The line-to-line writing is strong. Dialogue feels natural and conversations aren't too short or too long. However, the style of speech does sometimes feel too similar between characters, though this is a common problem even among tier 1 AVNs.
Decisions
The game operates using a choice/points based system. Currently, there don't seem to be any major key choices impacting the story, and the points don't often make much of a difference to which scenes you see. In dialogue selection, there is normally either a "correct" choice which gives you the most points, or none of the choices give you any points and only change the dialogue slightly, or all of the options can be selected one after another before continuing. There are only a handful of places where there are several choices, none of which are truly "correct", which have an impact beyond a small dialogue change. This is certainly better than some games where the developer wastes too much time writing a bunch of branches and so confusing the story and delaying the game (I'm looking at you Where the Heart Is). We can expect to see some previous choices have more of an impact in future updates.
Sex
Sex scenes are frequent, and all (or at least almost all) are extended with multiple animations. The animations aren't very sophisticated, and they are so far all very vanilla (save some optional, fun lactation play). As always, your mileage will vary with how hot you find them.
Audio
Audio consists of some nice background music and the occasional sound effect. More could be done with audio during sex scenes, and there are occasional periods without background music which could benefit from something like ambient background sound.
Verdict
A strong entry into the AVN genre, with a surprisingly long playtime and good writing. While the visuals aren't tier 1 quality and the sex scenes somewhat basic, you can expect a decently engaging story with increasingly 3D characters.
I'm really enjoying this so far. I've just got up to a point with a character where I have to choose between 'It doesn't have to be him' and 'He doesn't determine your self-worth'. The walkthrough mod is telling me that the choice can lead to a path where the character cheats with me. I'm happy to take this sort of path, but I was wondering whether if I don't take this path, I can still get together with the character; perhaps she leaves her partner first? Advice would be much appreciated<3
You can download the official guide in the downloads listed above. However, because there are so many decisions in the game, the guide is pretty long. Therefore, if you want to use a walkthrough, I would recommend using the walkthrough mod on the f95 page, which lists the points for most decisions. Then you can supplement that with the official guide for when the mod isn't enough.
this is one of those games that one might not think much of, until at least they get a chance to play them. So far, i couldn't ask for a better story, and the girls are all adorable. as a brownie (lol) jameela is a personal favorite, but thats due more to her sheer cuteness than anything else in my eyes. I just ended up finishing he game from start to finish in one sitting, and man im so glad i did. gotta say tho Mr/Ms Dev, you chose a hell of a spot to end it on, so i really want to see what happens next. I do hope the next update comes in a timely manner, I havent looked forward to an update since Caribdis's latest work. and coming from me, thats high praise. I cannot wait to see what you have in store for the next bit of the story.
Onto the game itself/ First off if youre just looking for something to fap to, move it right along this aint for you. the story is involved with plenty of tension, plenty of cute and somewhat realistic moments, and a good story to serve as a backbone to the whole thing. I dont generally look for a good plot in games of this nature but its always a very pleasant surprise to find one. and the dev has done an outstanding job of conveying this story to us consumers. If youre someone that loves a good story alongside some fun sexy bits this is one for you. plenty of decisions to make and plenty of beautiful women to woo, alongside a healthy dose of drama that could be something much bigger in future; this here is a winning combination. Without spoiling anything, all i can say is that this game is ABSOLUTELY worth a download and playthru, few games of this caliber exist in this genre. Character designs are on point, story is nicely gripping, and each girl has a personality that really shines thru. I honestly wish i hadnt found this game until it was in its complete state as it leaves me wanting more and more each time. All i can hope for is that updates come out at a similar quality at a faster pace, but thats just me being selfish. its worth the wait between updates but if you have the patience, i feel like it would be good to keep tabs on this game till completion and get the whole thing in one shot. IF you dont mind waiting between updates dear user, i HIGHLY recommend downloading and playing thru this game at your earliest convenience. You wont be disappointed.
And finally to you Raybae, Id like to thank you for such an incredible contribution to the genre and i cannot want to see what you have in store for the future. I WIsh you all the absolute best in both your own personal life and your life as a developer. Frankly, if i was in a position to fund the project and fulfill your wildest development dreams, i would without hesitation. i expect great things from you Raybae, and i cannot wait to see what you have in store for the future. May the winds of fortune favor you in your every endeavor, and I hope that the next update really brings things to the fore. Best of luck, and perhaps on the next update ill have more to rave about. To whose thinking of getting the game, i cannot stress this enough: GET THE GAME YOU WONT REGRET IT
hmm the release schedule said sept 23 for public release and it's already sept 30 and still no public release? because i want to know how will Maria and Gloria will open up more for the MC XD
i'm anxiously waiting for the public release because i like the storyline and the relationship development i've made with Maria :D
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Ok question on day 4 ( Sunday )when at the Market talking with Yumi in the background a Girl raises her top. Who is the Girl, Bra or Flesh, and who takes her away?
haha thanks for the hint! Nice Easteregg!
What are the Chances of Also getting Maria's Sister Gloria Into the Harem? Or Maybe Some of the Other Girls that the MC has been with?
How do you get this scene
That scene is when you make Maria BJ you in the shower.
i need more please
If you like to Love the Game , Of course you want More who does not?
yes
How much portion of this game has ended yet?
+recommended, there is so much scene and lots of characters
love your game keep up the good work can't wait for more
Loving it so far but the dialogue definitely needs to be proofread. At one point Maria referred to the MC when talking to her sister by saying "Mr Surname." And there are cases where the name doesn't match the person saying it.
I also am confused by how you choose who shows up in the relationship tab. Someone that you sleep with once and never again (from what I can tell) and someone who you don't need to impress at all, shows up. Meanwhile the daughters across the hall who are in several scenes and whom one hates you and one doesn't, aren't on the screen at all.
any intentions for adding anal?
Some of Zenya dialog of version 0.9 with the mc needs some fixings, sometimes she talks but mc name is on display and sometimes she\ or mc talks there is no name on it. thanks for the update great game.
PC Requirements! Please!
It's a visual novel. You don't have to worry about system requirements. Any pc bought/assembled in the last 10 years should run it without issue
Yup,❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Was pretty bored playing this
K.
Thanks for your useless reply it really adds a lot to the general conversation
A comment doesnt have to be useful duh
K.
Your original comment isn´t anymore useful either
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okay
Longest conversation on the whole thread... way to go guys
Just curious, is there anyway to change the graphics settings to higher?
When's next update?
Yesterday
This sure is a weird country, where underage students would get blamed if it came out they had a relationship with their adult teacher, losses made by a company have to be paid back to them by the person who made the mistake and where debt collectors go after kids for debt after their parents, who made the debt, passed away. I mean yea its also a country with countless hot horny women who are perfectly fine with being in a harem, so its not all bad. But damn, that is a weird fuckin country lol
Alot of countries pass debt on to the the next of kin
As far as I can tell its only in south asian countries. It is hardly widespread and even in those countries it is rarely enforced.
Why do half the characters sound like Al Pacino in Scene of a woman.
Tits! UH AH!
I have a question about the Domination route. The game warns that there will be heavy consiquences for taking that route. I tried a tiny bit of it and it came across as suuuuuuper rapey so i went back and chose the other option. Is that intentional? Is that what happens if i follow that route?
It's an all-around great game! The only small issue for me(or if anyone else agrees with me) are the facial constructions. Especially for the main girls like yumi, the placement of her eyes are far too apart and far too low and so is her nose. And some girls have eyes too close to each other. In the scene where you have coffee with sam and had a bet, the placement of the waitress' eyes are more symmetrical than her's. For me who spend a long time adjusting custom characters in games with character creation, i tend to not over adjust, especially if i want to portray a character of different race(other that asian) in Illusion games like Honey Select, AI * Shoujo, and Koikatsu. Or maybe it's just me being nitpicky 😅
I think you just have a good eye for faces and most people aren't paying attention. I agree btw.
whens the next update going to go live
привет ты смог сделать?
So any true subs?
i think you nailed what you were going for, girls with stories and character. Story is interesting and still has a lot of potential.
just finished the game and I feel sad for that cliffhanger
any femdom in this game and character name, please?
or dominating personality female character name
You can name the character, but as to femdom it's clear the author is going for maledom or vanilla. Which, I personally prefer, but to each their own.
I personally also prefer that too my guy
This is absolutely outstanding so far! I was apprehensive about downloading, because at first I didn't care for how the character models looked, but eventually I got used to them, and I'm glad I did, because this story is shaping up to be great! I can't wait for the next release, and I'm definitely hoping that there's maybe a scene involving Olivia and Sam in the future, if you know what I mean ;3c
Any updates for the next version?
我以為萬聖節折扣有最新的渲染，結果沒有，難過
My shortform review (v0.8.0)
Visuals
The game's renders are middling-quality. However the time saved here has clearly been used to extend the game's length (for the unaware, rendering takes a very long time).
The game uses a style of model which sits between anime and photorealistic. This is an appropriate choice given the rendering quality, but the models aren't as visually engaging as premium AVNs. The women mostly have large breasts, which is fine by me, but small-titty lovers will feel left out.
Writing
The plot starts slowly, but progressively gets more interesting. However, it is never the game's strongest point, as the game feels much more focused on telling each of the girls' stories. Thankfully, the characters are not cardboard cut-outs. As the game progresses, it carefully balances screen-time between all the important characters, which it uses to flesh them out with backstory, personality and development. However, the game falls into the trap of including too many women, reducing the amount of time which can be given to each one. This doesn't feel as egregious as something like My New Family, because the mc is not (yet) in anything approaching a serious relationship with anyone, so there isn't a feeling of disconnect between who the mc should be paying attention to versus where he is spending his time. But there are some women (notably Paige) who feel they should have been given more attention, due to their importance in the plot and the mc's backstory.
The mc is written without a strong personality. This avoids a common problem in AVNs, where strong mc personalities often lead to irritation or uncomfortable player-avatar disconnect. However, the mc's dialogue does sometimes come across as bland. The mc is intended to be morally upright in the plot, and thankfully this does come across in the writing.
The line-to-line writing is strong. Dialogue feels natural and conversations aren't too short or too long. However, the style of speech does sometimes feel too similar between characters, though this is a common problem even among tier 1 AVNs.
Decisions
The game operates using a choice/points based system. Currently, there don't seem to be any major key choices impacting the story, and the points don't often make much of a difference to which scenes you see. In dialogue selection, there is normally either a "correct" choice which gives you the most points, or none of the choices give you any points and only change the dialogue slightly, or all of the options can be selected one after another before continuing. There are only a handful of places where there are several choices, none of which are truly "correct", which have an impact beyond a small dialogue change. This is certainly better than some games where the developer wastes too much time writing a bunch of branches and so confusing the story and delaying the game (I'm looking at you Where the Heart Is). We can expect to see some previous choices have more of an impact in future updates.
Sex
Sex scenes are frequent, and all (or at least almost all) are extended with multiple animations. The animations aren't very sophisticated, and they are so far all very vanilla (save some optional, fun lactation play). As always, your mileage will vary with how hot you find them.
Audio
Audio consists of some nice background music and the occasional sound effect. More could be done with audio during sex scenes, and there are occasional periods without background music which could benefit from something like ambient background sound.
Verdict
A strong entry into the AVN genre, with a surprisingly long playtime and good writing. While the visuals aren't tier 1 quality and the sex scenes somewhat basic, you can expect a decently engaging story with increasingly 3D characters.
They wrote a whole god damn essay
Was thinking the same thing
Gotta kind of respect it tho
Exactly. I still wont read it, tho.
I'm really enjoying this so far. I've just got up to a point with a character where I have to choose between 'It doesn't have to be him' and 'He doesn't determine your self-worth'. The walkthrough mod is telling me that the choice can lead to a path where the character cheats with me. I'm happy to take this sort of path, but I was wondering whether if I don't take this path, I can still get together with the character; perhaps she leaves her partner first? Advice would be much appreciated<3
there will be another path with her in future
Thank you! Corruption it is then!
the cliffhanger! when is the next update? :D i'm eager to know what will happen to MC and one of the girl's sister.
so hyped for next update, we gunna be able to bang carol anytime soon?
is there a walkthrough for the scenes?
You can download the official guide in the downloads listed above. However, because there are so many decisions in the game, the guide is pretty long. Therefore, if you want to use a walkthrough, I would recommend using the walkthrough mod on the f95 page, which lists the points for most decisions. Then you can supplement that with the official guide for when the mod isn't enough.
Finally!!!
this is one of those games that one might not think much of, until at least they get a chance to play them. So far, i couldn't ask for a better story, and the girls are all adorable. as a brownie (lol) jameela is a personal favorite, but thats due more to her sheer cuteness than anything else in my eyes. I just ended up finishing he game from start to finish in one sitting, and man im so glad i did. gotta say tho Mr/Ms Dev, you chose a hell of a spot to end it on, so i really want to see what happens next. I do hope the next update comes in a timely manner, I havent looked forward to an update since Caribdis's latest work. and coming from me, thats high praise. I cannot wait to see what you have in store for the next bit of the story.
Onto the game itself/ First off if youre just looking for something to fap to, move it right along this aint for you. the story is involved with plenty of tension, plenty of cute and somewhat realistic moments, and a good story to serve as a backbone to the whole thing. I dont generally look for a good plot in games of this nature but its always a very pleasant surprise to find one. and the dev has done an outstanding job of conveying this story to us consumers. If youre someone that loves a good story alongside some fun sexy bits this is one for you. plenty of decisions to make and plenty of beautiful women to woo, alongside a healthy dose of drama that could be something much bigger in future; this here is a winning combination. Without spoiling anything, all i can say is that this game is ABSOLUTELY worth a download and playthru, few games of this caliber exist in this genre. Character designs are on point, story is nicely gripping, and each girl has a personality that really shines thru. I honestly wish i hadnt found this game until it was in its complete state as it leaves me wanting more and more each time. All i can hope for is that updates come out at a similar quality at a faster pace, but thats just me being selfish. its worth the wait between updates but if you have the patience, i feel like it would be good to keep tabs on this game till completion and get the whole thing in one shot. IF you dont mind waiting between updates dear user, i HIGHLY recommend downloading and playing thru this game at your earliest convenience. You wont be disappointed.
And finally to you Raybae, Id like to thank you for such an incredible contribution to the genre and i cannot want to see what you have in store for the future. I WIsh you all the absolute best in both your own personal life and your life as a developer. Frankly, if i was in a position to fund the project and fulfill your wildest development dreams, i would without hesitation. i expect great things from you Raybae, and i cannot wait to see what you have in store for the future. May the winds of fortune favor you in your every endeavor, and I hope that the next update really brings things to the fore. Best of luck, and perhaps on the next update ill have more to rave about. To whose thinking of getting the game, i cannot stress this enough: GET THE GAME YOU WONT REGRET IT
Finally an update !
hmm the release schedule said sept 23 for public release and it's already sept 30 and still no public release? because i want to know how will Maria and Gloria will open up more for the MC XD
i'm anxiously waiting for the public release because i like the storyline and the relationship development i've made with Maria :D
作者釋出最新版本囉，在他的patreon主頁，網址在下方：
https://www.patreon.com/raybaegames
I only see v0.6 on Patreon.
The public release was meant to be yesterday but not up yet.
Sure it'll be soon though.
公開版本已經釋出到0.7版了，0.8版本，不過優先給訂閱會員體驗，公開得再等幾天。作者之前生病，所有排程都向後延了。
please get back ! I want to date with nora and jameela !
like the look of the game but i have to ask is there going to be any growing or transformation of any kind?
Is there any sound in the game or will there ever be sound?